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Doppelganger - Page 022

November 28th, 2016, 12:00 am
Honestly though, how many of you thought it was gonna be the prince? :D
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Livin4thelamb October 22nd, 2016, 11:17 pm
This is Ryleigh Hamia Abhibhaavak. She is the head of the Royal Guard and is a no nonsense kind of lady.
Livin4thelamb December 2nd, 2016, 1:29 pm
If you want to read Ryleigh's backstory, click here: http://livin4thelamb.deviantart.com/art/Ryleigh-s-Story-648451438
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Elizabeth Weadick (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 7:21 am
Whew, am I glad that cliffhanger is over!!! :D Finally, Oliver, the "big dude," is challenged by another and way better "dude!" I love the loophole you threw our way, how the Captain was a lady!! It gives this already fantastic comic even more spice!!
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 7:41 am
@Elizabeth Weadick : oh my word, I just laughed again. Yeah, Ryleigh is one of the few people that Oliver Desolair will listen to. Ryleigh's from a kingdom in the south called The Erengave Desert. Although this kingdom is now her home.
Alex M (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 7:49 am
I like her gold armor! Does that designate something particular?
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 8:08 am
@Alex M: Yes, that she is a captain. Desolair is just a lieutenant.
Alex M (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 7:50 am
Also, I just noticed her last name. :)
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 8:10 am
@Alex M: Oh? Well, her middle name has significance in Arabic and her last name means something in Hindi. Is that what you noticed?
Alex M (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 5:31 pm
@Livin4thelamb: I didn't know that. Very cool! My general thought was that while she's no nonsense, her name is a little more complex. :P
MJ Neal (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 11:11 am
Stare down for the win!
I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm also very impressed by all these new art skills and visual storytelling devices you've developed. All your hard work here really shows beautifully :)
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 11:44 am
@MJ Neal: Yay! You're here! Thanks for commenting! I'm always eager to know what people think about the pages so comments make my day. And thanks so much! Yeah, they're a lot of work, but totally worth it.
Becky Farb (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 7:58 pm
The lighting on this page is incredible! I especially love Riley's backlighting in the first panel. The play of shadow and light on her face adds to her intensity.
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 8:06 pm
@Becky Farb: Excellent! Just what I was going for. I really wanted a contrast in panel 3 - light and darkness, essentially life and death for Selina.
NCWSturgis (Guest) November 29th, 2016, 8:31 pm
I love the stare-down between the two.
~~~~TENSION~~~~~~~
Livin4thelamb November 29th, 2016, 8:40 pm
@NCWSturgis: I was originally planning like red lightning crackling in the background...but that felt a little too anime - I think the silent tension works better. Less is more, I guess!
Guest November 29th, 2016, 8:48 pm
@Livin4thelamb: What's wrong with Anime? :) No worries. But I would have laughed. :)
Livin4thelamb November 29th, 2016, 10:35 pm
@Guest: Ha ha, nothing! But Desolair's basically seeing red right now...so it's applicable.
Capfan (Guest) February 4th, 2017, 10:38 pm
2nd Panel You should re-release the second panel but put mortal combat health bars above them! we could make up moves and make bets on who would win!
Livin4thelamb February 4th, 2017, 10:42 pm
@Capfan: Ha ha, yes! Ooh, that'd be a fairly close fight...but ultimately I would have to say Ryleigh would win. Desolair has strength and endurance but she's got agility and a tactical mind.