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Doppelganger - Page 020

November 14th, 2016, 12:00 am
Dude, give her a BREAK! She just walked three miles on a broken knee...RUDE.
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Livin4thelamb October 5th, 2016, 6:43 pm
Apparently, he's not buying it.
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Alex M (Guest) November 14th, 2016, 12:05 am
I may have said this before, but my favorite bit is the heartbeat in the background. It takes a minute to connect it to what's happening, like a delayed reaction, but not in a bad way. Like your brain goes, "Oh, she's so nervous now her heart is pounding."
Livin4thelamb November 14th, 2016, 12:07 am
@Alex M: Thank you! I stole it from my Melody and Bit story ;-)
Alex M (Guest) November 14th, 2016, 11:22 am
@Livin4thelamb: Oh! I bet I subconsciously remember it from that. That was a fun little comic.
Livin4thelamb November 14th, 2016, 12:17 pm
@Alex M: Thank you! I like it too. It was just an excercise to create full pages while telling a story (opposed to the Wheatley & Kiwi comics) and I still read through it now and again. :-)
Becky Farb (Guest) November 14th, 2016, 1:26 pm
I appreciate how, in the fourth panel, you showed Oliver only from his eyepatch side. The lack of a visible eye emphasizes how menacing he must seem from Selina's point of view.
Livin4thelamb November 14th, 2016, 1:41 pm
@Becky Farb: Excellent! I was going for that, AND to show that while he's blind on the side we can see in panel four, he can see right through Selina, so to speak.
Elizabeth Weadick (Guest) November 28th, 2016, 7:15 am
I like how you can see the polar-opposite looks on Carrots and Olivers faces!! Also, I love the hover tag---they have each been so creative every week!!! :D And the facial expressions are great----I don't know how you make them all communicate to us readers so well!!!
Livin4thelamb November 28th, 2016, 7:34 am
@Elizabeth Weadick: well, thanks, Elizabeth! I actually just laughed reading your comment. Yeah, Carrot and Oliver are as about as opposite as can be. And yes, I always want the expressions and background details to say as much (if not more) as the text in the speech bubbles. I guess so far so good. :-)