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Doppelganger - Page 016

October 17th, 2016, 12:00 am
phew indeed
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Livin4thelamb September 11th, 2016, 10:25 pm
You have to hand it to her, even though she was almost crushed to death in a dusty tunnel, her hair remained perfect.
It's like she's destined to be a princess or something.
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Alex M (Guest) October 17th, 2016, 12:05 am
Oh, now I'm going to have to go back through and read them all again looking for the hover tags!
Also, I'm curious: Is the "hhsshhh" sound rocks settling, or dust rising, or something else?
Livin4thelamb October 17th, 2016, 6:46 am
@Alex M: Thanks! Yes I try put something funny/interesting in the alt text on each page :-) and yes, the hissing noise is luckily only the dust settling. It will be a little while until Vellian realizes Selina is gone and once she does, she'll incorrectly assume Selina died in the cave-in.
Elizabeth Weadick (Guest) October 18th, 2016, 2:12 pm
I love how you can totally see relief on Selina's face!!! And look at those knees and elbows...ouch!!! And you were sure serious when you said she would only get dustier and dirtier...;)
Livin4thelamb October 21st, 2016, 10:34 am
@Elizabeth Weadick : Yes! And she stays pretty dusty for a while. I can't wait until she gets a bath so I can stop drawing all the dirt on her skin. :-) ha ha
Becky Farb (Guest) October 18th, 2016, 10:31 pm
The sudden change from a grey/brown color palette to bright green emphasizes the change in mood. I was left with a palpable feeling of relief. Well done!
Livin4thelamb October 21st, 2016, 10:39 am
@Becky Farb: Excellent! I am always eager to hear about first impressions from a page. Thank you :-)