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September 26th, 2016, 12:00 am
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Livin4thelamb August 21st, 2016, 6:30 pm
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Becky Farb (Guest) September 26th, 2016, 9:39 pm
The way the cracking and falling rocks are slightly blurred really adds to the feeling of rapid movement. Also, her expression when she realizes what's about to happen. Priceless!
Livin4thelamb September 26th, 2016, 10:31 pm
@Becky Farb: Thanks for noticing! And yeah, it's that moment of....this might have been a bad idea....
Elizabeth Weadick (Guest) September 27th, 2016, 2:11 pm
Uh oh! It looks (and sounds!) like just one thing went wrong w/ the attack! I love the way there are small rocks falling w/ the bigger ones, and how you can see that Selina has dirt smudges on her!
Livin4thelamb September 27th, 2016, 4:14 pm
@Elizabeth Weadick : thanks! And oh, the dirt smudges are only going to get worse!